*Key parts of feedback are highlighted - Kimberly*
I think it truly captures the true "Elle" style. I think the shading is pretty good, and the face is good too! I'm glad you took the time to make a side-faced view, those are always difficult to master. I also like how you used text to show that you should always feel comfortable in your own skin. This is a big step up for you! Good luck, I hope to see you in the finale! 8/10.
Kimberly: It looks so fun and happy! However, I feel as though both the face and hair lacks dimension. I love pale models but I think this graphics is in need of a tan or darker model as the model would look perfect if she was glowing!.. and a lovely smile as well (a happy model goes perfectly with the graphic criteria)l! 8/10.
Kirsten: I love how girly this graphic is, and I can tell you’ve taken time with the detail on the top of the dress, its general style is good too =) I like the pose, however I think there’s just something not quite right about the face/expression, it looks a little … almost forced of the model, but maybe I just prefer the use of Stardoll faces! The skin shading is alright, but the left hand sticks out a bit to me – I think the wrist is too small and the rest of the hand is a bit big. I think you’ve really understood the task and I do think it shows improvement, well done! 7/10
The message is loud and clear, and that is for sure my favorite thing about this, it definitely spoke to me too. The shading is pretty good, but the collarbone could use some working on. Also, the bra and underwear could use maybe some decoration, or lace or something.... Anyways, I really like this, and I hope to see more of you in the next task if you make it! 7.5/10.
Kimberly: I love the text aspect of this graphic, A+ for originality! So many girls are pressured into being skinny but no matter what size, everyone is beautiful. I really applaud you for what you are going through but still pulling off a strong graphic with meaning, well done! I disagree with Lindsey on the fact the collar bone needs to be worked on, as in reality the collar bone and cheekbone both would not be as prominent as a on a skinner figure. I am quite dissapointed in the shading of the graphic, it's very bare and sad looking rather than positive and playful, and i think face shading, and a brighter underwear would have worked better than a darker one. Nice simple hair although I think waves would have looked better. Slightly disappointed overall but a nice graphic... 7/10.
Kirsten: You’ve interpreted the task differently to show another persepective, which is good. However I think the graphic itself wasn’t that well made, it seems a bit rushed. I think it’s the shading really, it seems undetailed, sorry. I know the subject is touchy for you, but I still think a little more detail could have been included, particularly with even just the skin shading – which we’ve seen you do so well! 6/10
Lip0:you took a inspiration (I'm assuming you are a Lady Gaga fan), and made a graphic out of it. The shading is near perfection, and the hair is pretty good too! Like Khol, I think you could use some work on the bra and underwear. In this, I can't see any (or little) shading, and that's just one thing that concerned me. I hope to see you in the finale! Good luck! 8.5/10.
Kimberly: I love this! My only concern is the doll up against the wall looks slightly awkward, so more attention could be put in trying to match the doll with the background. I love the paragraph, nice *bright* underwear. You could have used more colour though! These graphics are too full of grey tones, I want more brightness! Overall well done, you've impoved so much... 8/10.
Kirsten: I can see this is something that you are passionate about via the text in the image, and I definitely think your graphics have improved. The skin is well shaded, and you’ve included little details such as the tattoo’s. The hair is ok, but maybe a little more depth with the shade is required in the upper part. Overall, good job =) 6/10.